Monday, December 8, 2008

Journal 20 God bless you!!!

Thank you for all!

I specially thank Mr. Sean for pointing out our English problems and fixing them. Withut your instruction, we cannot even start to wirit the intruducing paragraph.

It is enjoyable for me to creat something from my thought and emotion. I cannot see and feel them until I I write down on the paper. Once my thought is written down, it can be kept physically forever. And my next generation can read my thought even after I will not exist. What is great treasure that anybody can have! Advanced compostion class supports me to have this treadure and I will keep doing whtat I have learned in this class for my life long. I hope to write like English speking people do. This is my challenage.

God bless you!!!!!

2 comments:

Candy said...

I hope we can speak English like native people. Try...

Saud said...

good luck in your life

Bye bye